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So much fic to write, so little time. I have a few ideas going that need more work, but I figured this little bit was done enough to post. Also, so much fic to read, so little time. Sometimes I wonder how people keep up with it all!

Title: Emergency Room
Fandom: RPS
Characters: Jensen Ackles and Jared Padalecki
Prompt: 024. Family
[livejournal.com profile] fanfic100 table: here
Word Count: 838
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: hurt!Jensen and angsty!Jared, but not for long.
Summary: Jeffrey Padalecki gets a shock when Jensen is brought into the hospital, a panicked Jared following behind him.
Disclaimer: Don’t know them, don’t even know if this is the type of work Jeff does, but thought it was a neat idea. :P
Author's Notes: I haven’t decided what’s supposed to have happened to Jensen here, but just wanted to write up a little fic for this idea, because I thought it was an interesting situation. Maybe I’ll add more to it at some point.


If anybody were to ask Jeff what his greatest fear was, he would tell them that it was seeing a family member come through the doors of the hospital on a stretcher. He’d never been able to think of anything worse, and always prayed that it would never happen. But, practicing in Dallas, he was bound to see a familiar face wheeled into the ER at some point. Still, it came as a shock when Jensen Ackles was rushed through those doors, the commotion around him suddenly muted as he fell into step with the stretcher, everything seeming to flow into slow motion. He felt the color drain from his own face at the sight of Jensen’s, so pale even against white, the paramedics forcing air into his lungs and trying to stem the flow of blood from his wounds.

“Jeff!”

Jeff’s head snapped up at the sound of a familiar voice, the world suddenly snapping back to normal, sound rushing back to his ears as everything returned to a regular speed that seemed almost too fast now. Something twisted inside of him when he saw Jared there, running along behind the stretcher, trying to keep up even as he was being shoved away. He swallowed hard when he saw the tears in Jared’s eyes, saw the panic there subside a little as they made eye contact. There was a sudden relief in Jared’s expression, a hopefulness that Jeff had seen so many times when they were younger. It was faith that only a little brother could have, somehow believing that Jensen would be okay now that he was in Jeff’s hands; Jeff would never let Jensen die.

“Sir, you have to stay back.”

Jeff moved mechanically with the stretcher as Jared was finally stopped, held back as they were passing through the double doors, heading for the OR.

“Jeff, please save him!”

He sucked in a breath at Jared’s desperate plea, suddenly feeling a pressure he never had before. No experience could have prepared him for this.

“Jeff!” He turned his focus to the female doctor running on the opposite side of the stretcher, her name suddenly escaping him even though they’d worked together for some time now. “Can you do this?”

Her expression held only the slightest bit of concern, her tone clearly urgent and professional. There was no room for a mistake here, and he had to swallow down his emotions or hand the job over to someone else, now. He glanced back at the doors they’d just passed through and saw Jared still standing on the other side of them, hopeful eyes staring through the glass. He looked back down at Jensen lying unconscious on the stretcher and nodded, letting the doctor in him take over.

“Yeah. Yeah, I can do this.”

****

He made his way out to the waiting room, each step like one through quicksand. He was exhausted after hours of surgery, hours of trying to keep Jensen alive, bringing his pulse back when there wasn’t one, and he wondered not for the first time in his career how he wasn’t dead himself by now. It took forever to reach that doorway, and he could see Jared waiting there, sitting and nervously tapping his foot on the floor over and over again, hands clasped together in what must have been prayer, tears dried on his cheeks. He tried to greet him with a smile, but didn’t think he’d managed to force one out when Jared spotted him and jolted into a standing position, darting forward. He stood, so tired he swore he was ready to pass out, and put a hand on his little brother’s shoulder.

“Jeff?” Jared asked breathlessly, eyes shining again with that childlike faith. “How is he?”

It took him a while to find the words, struggling with the English language for a moment, his brain fuzzy with stress and lack of sleep, and he felt Jared tense beneath his palm. He finally managed the smile, before he could find the words, and squeezed Jared’s shoulder lightly.

“He’s gonna be fine.”

Jared’s sigh of relief was so deep, Jeff felt it. He saw a wave pass through Jared’s body, every muscle letting go of the tension it had held, tears of a different kind filling his eyes, and then Jared was wrapping him up in a hug so tight he could barely breathe.

“Thank you,” Jared whispered, crying quietly on Jeff’s shoulder. “Thank you, Jeff.” He pulled away and smiled through his tears, patting Jeff’s arm. “I knew it. I knew you could do it; knew he was safe when I saw you. I don’t know what I would’ve done…” Jeff nodded as Jared wiped his tears away, a weight lifting off of his shoulders when he realized he’d managed to protect his little brother from that kind of loss. “Can I see him?”

“Yeah,” Jeff said, wrapping an arm around Jared’s shoulders. “Yeah, come on. I’ll take you to him.”
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Date: 2009-06-14 06:16 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jmystic.livejournal.com
awwww... I loved it. Big Brothers are awesome!

Date: 2009-06-14 06:11 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] timehasa-way.livejournal.com
Thanks! Yes, they are! :)

Date: 2009-06-14 06:23 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] daisychains1957
awwwwww, see brothers, whether real or not, they are always there for their little bros (even in fiction) :DD

Date: 2009-06-14 06:11 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] timehasa-way.livejournal.com
Absolutely! :D

Date: 2009-06-14 06:45 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ymmy12.livejournal.com
gotta love the big brother

Date: 2009-06-14 06:11 pm (UTC)

Date: 2009-06-14 07:55 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] evening-spirit.livejournal.com
Oh, my, it's so powerful! It's a new and fresh concept and I'm surprised I've never come across a fic featuring Jared's doctor brother, even though this setting seems so obvious now!

And you pulled it off excellently. There was no interaction between the J's, no information about what has happened that led to this situation, but none of this matters. What's important is here and now and Jeff's struggle, and even in all that the love/friendship between Jared and Jensen are so strong and so obvious. Great job here!

Date: 2009-06-14 06:12 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] timehasa-way.livejournal.com
Thank you so much!! :D

Date: 2009-06-14 08:00 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] z3s-keep-going.livejournal.com
awww love it~

Date: 2009-06-14 06:12 pm (UTC)

Date: 2009-06-14 08:15 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] witchy78.livejournal.com
Yeah ! I've been searching for so long for a fic in which Jeff would be Jensen's doctor because of a sickness or because he was hurt ;o)
Can't wait to read some more !!

Date: 2009-06-14 06:12 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] timehasa-way.livejournal.com
Aww, well thank you!! :D

Date: 2009-06-14 08:34 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] inanna-maat.livejournal.com
aww!!!! I love Jeff´s POV... a great idea and so well written...

Date: 2009-06-14 06:13 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] timehasa-way.livejournal.com
Thank you!! :D

Date: 2009-06-14 08:52 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cinco-series.livejournal.com
Aww it was so amazing ! Your Jeff was awesome and i love the fact that it can be read as gen as well as slash.

Date: 2009-06-14 06:13 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] timehasa-way.livejournal.com
Thank you!! :D

Date: 2009-06-14 09:13 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] apieceofcake.livejournal.com
Nicely done :-)

Date: 2009-06-14 06:13 pm (UTC)

Date: 2009-06-14 09:24 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nightowl81.livejournal.com
I didn't even notice I was holding my breath while reading this! Don't you dare to scare me like that ever again! ♥

Date: 2009-06-14 06:14 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] timehasa-way.livejournal.com
Aww, hehe, I'll try not to! ♥

Date: 2009-06-14 09:48 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sugarplumwrong.livejournal.com
Awwwww...Gotta love a big brother. *hugs*

Date: 2009-06-14 06:14 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] timehasa-way.livejournal.com
Big brothers are awesome! *hugs* :)

Date: 2009-06-14 10:05 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] corbyinoz.livejournal.com
Nice. You managed to pack a lot into a short space.

Corby

Date: 2009-06-14 06:14 pm (UTC)

Date: 2009-06-14 11:47 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] supernatangel67.livejournal.com
This was awesome!!! Even with no interaction with Jared and Jensen, the love that Jared had showed right through. I'v wanted to see fics featuring Jeff as Jensen/Jared's doctor (although I don't think he could be Jared's if it was serious). I loved it. Would like to see you make it into a full length fic, but if you don't it's okay!!!! Thanks for sharing.

Date: 2009-06-14 06:15 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] timehasa-way.livejournal.com
Thank you so much!! I'd like to write more to it, but we'll see what happens. :)

Date: 2009-06-14 12:33 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] siouxsmn-3745.livejournal.com
Great interaction between the two brothers, and the blind faith Jared has in Jeff.

In case you decide to do another chapter and need an idea for Jensen's wounds, keep in mind that Jeff is an Orthopedic Specialist and not a GP or ER physician. (I know because Jeff did the surgery on my knee three years ago and this was BEFORE I knew about Supernatural and his famous brother).

Date: 2009-06-14 06:17 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] timehasa-way.livejournal.com
Ah, so I guess this is a bit of an AU fic, then. :P Good to know, for future reference! And that's quite an experience!

Thank you!! :)

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Date: 2009-06-14 12:35 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lovetheguys.livejournal.com
Wow! A very powerful, involving story!

A great read!

Love, Robin

Date: 2009-06-14 06:17 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] timehasa-way.livejournal.com
Thank you!! :D

Date: 2009-06-14 12:57 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rogsi.livejournal.com
what an adorable story. I really enjoyed that.

Date: 2009-06-14 06:17 pm (UTC)

Date: 2009-06-14 01:15 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] heather03nmg.livejournal.com
Loved the Jeff POV. Would love to see more!! (hint hint)

Date: 2009-06-14 06:18 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] timehasa-way.livejournal.com
Haha, thank you!! I think I might try more at some point. :)
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Date: 2009-06-14 06:18 pm (UTC)

Date: 2009-06-14 03:48 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] aldehyde.livejournal.com
awh this was really adorable. thank goodness for big bros!

Date: 2009-06-14 06:18 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] timehasa-way.livejournal.com
Thank you! Big brothers are the best! :)

Date: 2009-06-14 04:36 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] brainstorm79.livejournal.com
Ooh, this one is great. but you can't just leave it there, so more must come and soon. and it would be lovely to know what actually happened *bouncing in anticipation*

Date: 2009-06-14 06:19 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] timehasa-way.livejournal.com
Haha, thank you!! I think I might try to add more to this one! :)

Date: 2009-06-14 05:40 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mangacat201.livejournal.com
Oh dear, you gave me quite a scare there for the minute. But it was an interesting little ficlet!!
Cat

Date: 2009-06-14 06:19 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] timehasa-way.livejournal.com
Thanks!! :)

Date: 2009-06-14 06:38 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] numb3r12.livejournal.com
Love it! Loved Jeff POV. I enjoy reading about the family interaction. I would love to know what happened to Jensen! Hint hint... :o))

Date: 2009-06-14 07:16 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] timehasa-way.livejournal.com
Thank you!! I'm thinking about writing more. :)

Date: 2009-06-14 09:19 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tishawyman.livejournal.com
That was so good. I do hope you add to it later. Like to know what happened. How are you doing today?

Date: 2009-06-15 12:07 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] timehasa-way.livejournal.com
Thank you! I think I might add to it. :)

I'm good, how are you?

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Date: 2009-06-14 10:32 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] neros-violin.livejournal.com
Brother love is a beautiful thing. I'm all snivel-y now.

Date: 2009-06-15 12:07 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] timehasa-way.livejournal.com
Aww, yes it is! :D

Date: 2009-06-15 02:11 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] jellicle.livejournal.com
Brilliant! Loved it!

Date: 2009-06-15 04:30 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] timehasa-way.livejournal.com
Thanks!! :D
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