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Title: Coming Home
Fandom: RPS
Characters: Jensen Ackles and Jared Padalecki
Prompt: 022. Enemies
[livejournal.com profile] fanfic100 table: here
Word Count: 29,073
Rating: NC-17 to start, but mostly R.
Warnings: Violence, angst, character death, and the one hardcore smex scene that I just had to throw in at the beginning.
Summary: The best way for me to summarize this is to just say that it's a J2 version of All Dogs Go To Heaven, but with humans instead of dogs, gay sex, less singing, some cursing, and just a tad more violence, considering the movie is pretty damn dark for an animated kids' movie.
Disclaimer: This is a shameless ripoff of an animated kids' movie made in 1989 with a squeeing fangirl's perfect cast. In other words, I am a loser. :P
Author's Notes: This idea randomly came to me one night, so I took it and ran with it. It made me ridiculously happy, even though it's sad (like the movie), and this is the end result. I don't usually write AU's, or anything like this, but I had so much fun with this Jensen, it was ridiculous. As if I didn't love the man enough already.

Part 1

Part 2

Part 3

Part 4

He’d been told that, when someone’s soulmate entered Heaven after them, they knew right away. They could just feel it. Jensen knew the moment that Jared arrived in Heaven. He felt it, like a pull on his own soul, urging him to find Jared. He made his way to the gates, hanging back and watching, grinning like a child when he saw Jared speaking to Misha. Jared was much older than Jensen had been when he’d finally arrived and stayed in Heaven, but he still looked young; just like Jensen remembered him. He watched as Jared was shown his book, had his handprint taken, and looked around.

Their eyes met, and the pull Jensen felt became stronger, Jared laughing as they finally came together and embraced each other, the joy of being reunited in Heaven greater than anything Jensen had ever felt.

“I missed you so much,” Jared said, pulling back and kissing him lightly on the lips. “I have so much to tell you.”

“Me too,” Jensen said, growing serious, taking Jared’s hand and slotting their fingers together. “There’s so much I have to explain, so many things that’ll make you understand why I did what I did, and…” Jared kissed him again, longer this time.

“Jensen, after I met you,” Jared said after he’d pulled away, staring into Jensen’s eyes, “Not one day of my life went by that I didn’t thank God for you.” Jensen smiled again, Jared mirroring his expression. “Jensen, I had a family. Mackenzie…she’s sweet as ever, but she’s all grown up, and…” Jared trailed off, laughing when he realized he’d begun to ramble. “I have so much to tell you.”

“So tell me,” Jensen said, turning and leading Jared further into Heaven. “Come on. I’ll show you around.”

Date: 2009-07-07 11:03 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cherry87a.livejournal.com
*cries* i loved loved all dogs go to heaven when i was a kid i saw it so many times so i broke the tape! I loved how you changed it to Jensen and Jared, so sad when he died but at least they meet in heaven again! i love how you wrote that when your soul mate in heaven kind of thing, *sighs* such a sweet and amazing story!!! so amazing!

Date: 2009-07-07 03:14 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] timehasa-way.livejournal.com
I loved it, too!! It's such a great movie!

Thank you so much!! :D

Date: 2009-07-07 04:58 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] trinipedia.livejournal.com
I'm crying like an idiot.
I mean, I knew how the story ended, but...god.

Just-thank you, once again, for moving me and making me so happy and aching for things I've forgotten about lately.

This was utter perfection.

Thank you.

Date: 2009-07-07 05:51 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] timehasa-way.livejournal.com
Aww! *HUGS* Thank you so, so much!!

Date: 2009-07-07 07:35 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rejeneration.livejournal.com
-smile- Wow. I'm such a sucker. I didn't know how I was going to feel about this one on the premise and I thought for _sure_ I wasn't going to bawl like a baby, but I did! And I love the whole retelling. You did some really imaginative stuff with the storyline. Trying to make it original and still weave in those people we knew into such different characters. Really, kudos to you!

Date: 2009-07-07 08:59 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] timehasa-way.livejournal.com
Thank you so much!! I'm so glad you liked it and gave it a chance! :D

Date: 2009-07-07 10:59 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] macbyrne.livejournal.com
Congratulations; you made me cry like a damn baby.

I couldn't remember the end of ADGtH; so I was reading this on the edge of my seat.

Beautiful job, bb. Just gorgeous. *sniffles* And YOU MADE ME CRY DAMMIT!!!

Date: 2009-07-08 01:37 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] timehasa-way.livejournal.com
Aww! *huggles* I'm sorry! But thank youuuu! :)

Date: 2009-07-08 12:34 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fanofsuper.livejournal.com
This is a great ending to a great story. I love how Jared & Jensen meet up again in Heaven. It was a surprise to me because I haven't seen the movie this was based on

Date: 2009-07-08 01:39 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] timehasa-way.livejournal.com
Thank you for all your wonderful comments! I kind of added this last part on. The movie just ends with Jensen's character going to Heaven, and that's it, but I just had to get Jensen and Jared together again! Glad you enjoyed it! :D

Date: 2009-07-08 11:31 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fanofsuper.livejournal.com
You're welcome & I think your way was much better to end it. They belong together.

Amy chance of a sequel ?

Date: 2009-07-09 02:43 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] timehasa-way.livejournal.com
Thanks! :) I honestly don't think I'll do a sequel, but you never know!

Date: 2009-07-10 01:01 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fanofsuper.livejournal.com
You're welcome & maybe is better than never so I'll take that

Date: 2009-07-08 04:39 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ragingvirgin.livejournal.com
Dude, I am suddenly reminded how much I had loved ALL DOGS GO TO HEAVEN as a kid, as I sit here, barely holding on to not crying. (What an evil idea this was, pairing two things I love and writing this. EVIL, I say. ILU.) This was fantastic---and ohmygodjensenhaskids 8DDDD. There are no words for mow much I enjoyed this. Totally favorite-ing it. Guh. Heart too swollen with love for epic J2ness.

Date: 2009-07-08 06:29 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] timehasa-way.livejournal.com
Aww, ILU2 for this comment! lol *hugs* Thank you so much! And yes, Jensen has kids! :D I had so much fun with this Jensen, I kind of fell in love with him and wanted him to be real. :P

Date: 2009-07-08 04:55 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] spiritedcretin.livejournal.com
It would be easier for me to comment if I could see the keyboard that is currently obscured by my tears. ;) I hadn't thought about the movie in so long, but this is a perfect retelling of the story. Thanks for sharing it!

Date: 2009-07-08 06:32 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] timehasa-way.livejournal.com
Thank you!! *hugs* :)

Date: 2009-07-08 11:33 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] applepie-x0.livejournal.com
*sobs* ♥

this was so beautiful ♥

Date: 2009-07-09 02:40 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] timehasa-way.livejournal.com
Thank you!! ♥

Date: 2009-07-09 03:59 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dontknowmyname.livejournal.com
I'm sad I didn't catch this sooner, it was so wonderful!

I'm pretty sure I've never cried this much at a story before lol but it was just so amazing and beautiful.

All Dogs Go To Heaven made me cry like a baby too so you definitely hit the same note. Great story!

Date: 2009-07-09 02:41 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] timehasa-way.livejournal.com
Aww, thank you so much!! *hugs*

Date: 2009-07-09 03:35 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] anifsemaj.livejournal.com
*sniffle*
Good job!

Date: 2009-07-09 04:46 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] timehasa-way.livejournal.com
Thanks!! :D

Date: 2009-07-09 09:55 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sam-dean-hot.livejournal.com
That was awesome. I LOVED All Dogs Go to Heaven when I was younger. And you did a really good job with this. I wish you could have found a way to get the (was it a crocodile or an alligator) what ever it was in there. But I know that that was kind of improbable. Great job.

Date: 2009-07-10 12:04 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] timehasa-way.livejournal.com
Thank you!! :D And yeah, I wasn't sure what to do about the alligator (I looked it up, lol), because I knew it totally wouldn't work. Especially with the whole premise of the alligator wanting to eat them, but then being their friend because of the whole singing/music thing, lol. So instead I just decided to have them run into Jason, and then have Jason acting like a rival until he finds out Jensen turned against Kane. It was pretty much the only thing I could come up with, but I think it fit in okay. :)

Date: 2009-07-12 11:12 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] untitleddemo.livejournal.com
This was such an awesome retelling! I loved the way you fit it all together. Enjoyable read! ♥

Date: 2009-07-13 06:55 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] timehasa-way.livejournal.com
Thank you!!! :D

Date: 2009-08-04 08:29 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tamzinrose.livejournal.com
I loved that film but I forgot how sad it made me. That was really beautiful and sweet and I'm not ashamed to admit it made me cry a little bit. Great job.

Date: 2009-08-04 09:17 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] timehasa-way.livejournal.com
Aww, thank you so much!! <3

Date: 2009-08-06 10:02 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] bonbonschnecke.livejournal.com
That was amazing. Never saw it! Wonderful written!

Date: 2009-08-06 08:37 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] timehasa-way.livejournal.com
Thank you so much!!! :D

Date: 2009-09-26 07:46 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dugindeep.livejournal.com
DUDE How many times can you kill Jensen? Jesus!

:-P

Daaaaaaw. This was adorable - the ending that is, because the rest is exciting and tense and all that. Is it bad that on part three, when I realized your rating was Rating: NC-17 to start, but mostly R I frowned because there'd be no more smexing? Hahah.

Date: 2009-09-26 08:14 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] timehasa-way.livejournal.com
LOL, I know!! I kill him ALL THE TIME, and somehow never realized it until you started reading all these. Like, you commented on the Life and Death one, and then I was like, "...Oh, damn. I've...I've actually killed him a lot." Hahaha. Oh, so terrible.

BUT, like I said! Based on a movie! And I totally ripped it off! So...yeah. I think that's my defense. :P

Thank youu! And lols, that is not bad at all! I think the exact same way when I read things. XD

Date: 2009-09-26 08:21 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dugindeep.livejournal.com
Hahaha, it's okay, it's so amusing to me now. It's not like I'll stop reading because you won't stop killing them.

Date: 2009-09-26 08:28 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] timehasa-way.livejournal.com
It's not like I'll stop reading because you won't stop killing them.
LOL, best comment ever!

Date: 2009-09-26 08:29 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dugindeep.livejournal.com
HEEEEEEEEEE!

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